The essay I wrote on JFK’s use of the rhetorical triangle was an essay that I am pretty proud of. However, being that it was a timed, in-class rough draft, there were a few things that needed major revision. For instance, by some odd happenstance, I forgot to include a thesis statement. I even committed a run-on sentence. Every correction I made is high-lighted in red on the “after” essay.
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